Feedback for presentations...A little late...

So, here is my feedback for the presentations before Thanksgiving - sorry about them being a little late, but I had a huge lab practical this week, so I've been super busy studying!

Travis:
-Great eye contact and speech, very informative
-try to vary tone, maybe tell a joke to maintain interest
-nicely dressed for presentation

Kayvan:
-interesting project - love the pictures!!!
-good letter, only 1-2 small grammatical/syntax errors
-survey was interesting - some numbering was a little off, but very cleaver idea overall
-maybe stick with brochures to give people on drillfield

Ben:
-very controversial topic - cool website/petition!
-great 'game plan', super interesting, and very creative
-try to look up at audience more while reading, I know that sounds wierd, but basically just try to look up every so often to let the audience know you still acknowledge them.

Mary Eileen:
-good outfit
-audience needs to be a little clearer, but overall great idea.
-I loved that your letter reads easily and is extremely captivating - great job!
-very catchy flyer - definitly attracts attention.

Taylor:
-Nice pictures and quotes, definitly attention-getting
-try to bring note cards so you don't have to look down to read slides.

Here they are, ENJOY!!!